about experiment 127

Hey world!

I have created this blog to be able to show the outside world my writing pieces and get comments and critiques (good and bad!) with my identity being hidden. I really love writing but I am always too embarrassed to let any friends or family read my pieces, so PLEASE comment and tell me exactly what is on your minds'!

Also, please try and answer all the survey questions scattered about my blog; this is another little experiment of mine!

I will be posting additions to my stories or even new stories at the very least once every two weeks. Different stories will have distinctly different names that no one should have trouble separating the two.

Anyway, if you stumble across my blog and like the writing, please follow me and comment/criticize away!

purple rain

Sunday, December 4, 2011

World of Impossible

Failing winds blow the mind
just as tigers rip it.
Colors burst like popped balloons
right when trails are lit.

The burning brush and orange embers
eat away the natural scene.
No more homes of nests to see
and now the bushes - far too lean.

The only scents
were swept away,
So here life awaits
yet another day

When stairs are never ending
in skys much too high,
for life goes on in this world of impossible
since everything is just a lie.

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