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Monday, December 19, 2011

sweet green flowers



The Nymph Echo

This is the painting that the poem below is inspired by. It is beautiful and exquisite, yet it has hints of mysteriousness to it. It's an amazing painting!



"MoMA | The Collection | Provenance Research Project | Max Ernst. The Nymph Echo. Paris 1936." MoMA | The Museum of Modern Art. 2010. Web. 20 Dec. 2011. <http://www.moma.org/collection/provenance/provenance_object.php?object_id=79316>.




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This is a poem inspired by the painting:
 “The Nymph Echo” by Max Ernst

Oh wanderer, have you stumbled
upon more ancient green? Whose
hands grip and grab at the
barren Earth! What life it does
take, the goddess dancing in the
middle! Was it placed there? And
if so, with a motive? Or did
random, sporadic chance bless us
with such mesmerizing fertility?

And as the yellow ball sinks
down below, and dark blue
ceilings crush down from above,
what more green could one
ask for? More hands reach out
from the giant leaves. Come nymphs!
They beckon you to come and
spread your magic all around!
More is needed, much, much, more.

But here, all I see is just an echo
for only few flowers live to talk of
nymphs. And their colors seem faded
about their dancing dresses. The
fingers that I see are very strange
and mysterious to me. Are they claws?
Ripping at all the remaining life?
Or are they dainty, long and elegant?
There to stimulate growth and prosperity?

More mysterious is what those
hands belong to, there hidden
away in the darkness behind
the vines. The yellow eye on the
stem, the orange face, innocents of
the worlds. There a cradle rocks
blue buds to sleep, how sweet!
More youth than one would have
thought, more birth, more life.

Is that a green lion climbing
way back there, near the hidden
lady? barer than the Earth?
And a lizard basking in the shady
undergrowth hanging near the
snakey body of the bird
nosed stem of the featherless fowl. Yet
so pronounced against the sky, reaching
from the darkness. Oh nymph, give it life!




As always, this post on this blog is by me. Every single blog is by myself, the creator of this blog. I hope you like it :)

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